语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;注意文中个别的句子错误;文章词汇使用多样性不足,且单词拼写错误较多。
It isn't rational to put all your egg in one basket;It is just a metaphor as a objective law; This truth tell people don't put their all hope in one thing;For example ,if you want to manage money matters,you can choose one or more financing product where you can invest;Because this way can reduce your financing's risk;If one of your financing product make you lost money,the others will make sure you can earn money,so the last result is your property safe. So this proverb is tell us how to reduct risk when you do something.It tell us that if you want to do something sucess as a mather person,the first thing is to reduce risk;So you must predict everthing will happen in the futher in every way you can.Then you can prepare some plan for the futher;