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As we all know that tourism is quite a booming business in our country. Also, tourism can accelerate local origins' economy. But do we all know that tourism can bring great harm to those scenic spots, which may finally cause a lot of environmental problems. when a scenic spot is very famous for tourists, there is no doubt that more and more people will go there for a visit. As a result that more and more gases form vehicles will pollute the place because transportation is developed along with the development of tourism. Besides, when it comes to the problems of people travelling a scenic spot, what jump into my mind are those question: where do they live? what do they eat? what they could do to the environment? and how do they deal with their wastes? I do not know the exact answers to those questions. But what i am sure is that the more people travel to a place, the more difficult those problems can be solved. Finally, man-made destruction also can damage the environment, especially those historical sites. After hundreds of years, some sites are so fragile that they fail to bear those man-made destruction. To put it in a nutshell, tourism can really damage our environment by all kinds of human problems.
