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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;复杂句的使用不是很丰富;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。
The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of trational festivals in China. It is celebrated on August 15 in lunar calender by Chinese. On that day, all the families will get together. The old can see their childs and the young can take care of their parents. The family will chat with each other about work, life, and something like that. There are many traditonal activities on that day. The family will enjoy the moon, which is round and bright. And the moon stands for geting together in Chineses culture. Besides, Chinese will enjoy moon kake and send it to relatives and friends. What's more, nowadays, many Chinese choose to have a trip on the Mid-Autumn Festival. The Mid-Autumn Festival is meaningful fro Chinese culture and all Chinese famliy.