- 分享到:
题目要求：
Arts (painting and music) does not directly improve people's life, so government should spend money on other important areas. Do you agree or disagree?
写作思路：
第一段：引入话题，艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段：社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平，如教育，医疗，环境或基础建设。但是这些并不会增加人民的幸福感受
第三段：人民需要艺术，因为：艺术相关人们的情感和价值观，这是人们行为的核心部分；艺术培养人的创造和创新能力；艺术是娱乐休闲方式，艺术是感情和精力释放的安全方式，艺术促进不同文化和民族间的理解
第四段：政府应该既投资社会基础服务，也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会
词汇拓展：
underestimate 低估
emphasize 强调
boom = prosper繁荣
Tackle 解决
quantify 量化
empower 使人增强力量
intangible 抽象的
not necessarily 不一定
solely = only 仅仅
inspire 激励
excel 出众
make the best of 充分利用
robust 有力量的
enhance 增强
channel 引导
文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章词汇表达丰富，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Nowadays some people argue that the government shoud spend money on other important areas instead of funding arts because it does not directly improve people's life. I don't agree with this view. Arts like music or painting plays an important role in our entertainment. For example, many peole like to listen to music after a long and stressful work. It helps people to relax and relief from anxiety, especially those slow and soft music. Furthermore, arts provides people with a good perspective to see the world. If a child learns to appreciate the arts, he or she is more likely to love everything beautiful in this world, including the flowers, animals ,trees and every beautiful scenary around us. As a result, this child may be more kind-hearted and enjoy his or her life. It's not deniable that arts cannot improve our life directly. It cannot boost our salary,nor it can improve our working skills. A man who enjoy arts is not have a higer possibility to be promoted. however, arts can make our city more interesting. In other words, we may feel boring on the streets when there is no painting coming into our sights. Also, it's hard to imagine a world without music which entertain us. In this sense, arts is an undivided part of our life and it improve our life quality in an invisible way. Therefore, I believe that government should spend money on arts and give finacial support to those talented artists. I am convinced that a flourish arts will make our life interesting and colourful.
