2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；注意文中个别的句子错误；文章词汇使用多样性不足，且单词拼写错误较多。

Ling in an age when the adolescent are lack of the necessary guidence and supervision,we can never fail to ignore the fact that teenager are become self-conscions.Under the circumstance,the youngster are more likely to believe in what they have listened or seen instead of thinking twice after drawing their conclusion,which undoubtedly considered contraversial or even unreasonble.