2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题。

Ling in an age when the adolescent are lack of the necessary guidance and supervision, we can never fail to figure out the fact that teenagers are become self-conscious. Under the circumstance, the youngsters are more likely to believe in what they have listened or seen instead of thinking twice after drawing their conclusion, which undoubtedly considered controversial or even unreasonable.