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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇，以及部分高级词汇，单词拼写也要仔细。
According to the figures of the survey ,we can draw a conclusion that if you accepted higher education,you will receive a better job,with a higher salary.In additions,the rates of unemployment is slow down with the higher education level. Why did it happen?In my oppinions ,there are saveral reason led to this phenomenons. First of all,people who received higher education,his qualities would be better,after they learned from the teacher.Second,they would accept more knowledge,which would include much skills and ideas about science and technelogy,it means these people could be more skillful and created.On the contary,the last of they didn't have enough knowledge so that most of they had to be a labour,while the rest would be unemployed at home. So,in order to have a better live,rather than to be a homeless,we should go to school,and plug away at our study to match our knowledge,or,in another word ,our life.
