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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；熟练使用了一些长难句；词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有些单词拼错了。
According to the figures of the survey ,we can draw a conclusion that if you received higher education,you will receive a better job,with a higher salary.In addition,the rate of unemployment is slow down with the higher education level. Why did it happen?In my oppinion ,there are several reason led to this phenomenons. First of all,people who received higher education,his qualities would be better,after they learned from the teacher.Second,they would accept more knowledge,which would include much skills and ideas about science and technelogy,it means these people could be more skillful and created.On the contary,the last of they didn't have enough knowledge so that most of they had to be a labour,while the rest would be unemployed at home. So,in order to have a better live,rather than to be a homeless,we should go to school,and plug away at our study to match our knowledge,or,in another word ,our life.
