2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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My hometown is Shenyang, which is a very beautiful city localed in eastnorth China. The most interesting place in my hometown which I would like to take you to visit is DashuaiFu. DashuaiFu is a very beautiful place also has dramatical history. In 1930s,this place was lived by ZhangXueliang who was the master of army in eastnorth. He did way very much works during the war in this place. So,the DashuaiFu just means the history to Shenyang people,and as a Shenyang people,I am very glace to take you to see the magic palce.