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作者词汇量积累不错，文中存在一些拼写错误；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
I am thrilled to know that you are going to visit my hometown and I can't wait to see you again. I miss everything that happened when I was in your city,and your parents and you were so kind to me that I will try my best this time to make your stay an enjoyable and memorable one. My home town,Changsha,is the capital of Hunan province and best known as the star city for its well developed entertainment industry and tourism. There arenumerous places and attractions worth recommending,and YueluM ountain is the first one that I'd like to introduce to you. Firstly,in the foot of Yuelu Mountain is the prominent Yuelu Academy. It has an exceedingly long history and its architecture ischaracteristic of Song Dynasty. Then,after a half hour,we will reach the Bird Forest. There are various rare birds there,and they can sing,perform,and interact with us. After about an hour,we will arrive at the peak,Baiyun Summit. The scenery there isspectacular and we can have a wonderful panorama of the wholecity。 I bet you must be very excited about all these activities,and the Yuelu Mountain is waiting focus to explore. All you need to do is pack up and go,and I assure you that this trip will be a great fun. Should you have any questionand suggestion,please let me know. I am looking forward to yourarrival.
