2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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welcome to my hometown.Here is the city of luoyang,where is famous for peony. Luoyang is a very famous city ,because it is a cncient capital for many dynasty.The moust famous dynasty is the Tang Dynasty.It's a great dynasty. So there are many monuments about Tang Dynasty.For example ,king's park、 the river of Luohe and so on. Besides,there is many delicious foods except monuments and peony. The Suixi is one of moust famous good food. It will be a great regret if you don't taste this good food.So i'm sure it will be a beautiful experience after you come here.