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【题目要求】
Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
【题目分析】
选择不同意更好写一些。列举两三个保护endangered animals的重要性。同时不要忘了说明人类也确实需要更多的土地。只不过不能只顾眼前利益(short term benefits)而已。
可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。
In the lecture, the professor questioned the new finding about T.rex leg bone remaining blood vessels, red blood cells, and collagen matrix. Frist, the professor suggested that the small braching channels inside the T.rex leg bone could be something else instead of blood vessels. Beacuse when the dinaosaur died, the body diposed by the bacteria. Those hollows more likely created by the bacteria colonizing. This point refures the view stated in the reading passage. Second, from the lecture we know that many animals don't have red blood cells. So the red blood cells can't not be found in some animals like T.rex. The red blood cells tested from the T.rex have a great chance from other materials. Third, according to the research we have aleardy achieved, we know that no collagen matrix are found old than 100 years. It probably beacuse collagen matrix can't survive more than 100 years. The collagen matrix found in the T.rex could be from the researcher'hand who once hold the T'rex leg bone before. This is another point where the listening opposes the reading passage.
