高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；文中衔接词丰富。

My favorite sport is playing football. I like football by chance,when I went home on my way I found a football, then I play it with my friends,from now on I love playing football so much. We always train and competition together. Bekehanmu is my favorite football player in uk. My hope is becoming a professional football player.