高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

My favorite sport was playing football. I was interested in football by chance, when I went home on my way I found a football, then I play it with my friends, from now on I love playing football so much. We always train and competition together. Bekehanmu is my favorite football player in uk. My hope is becoming a professional football player.