句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
My favorite sport was playing football. I was interested in football by chance, when I went home on my way I found a football, then I play it with my friends, from now on I liked playing football so much. We always take place training and competition together. Bekehanmu is my favorite football player in uk. My hope is becoming a professional football player.