高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视。

My favorite sport was playing football. I was interested in football by chance, when I went on my home way I found a football, then I played it with my friends. From now on I like playing football so much. We always take place trainning and competition together. Bekehanmu is my favorite football player in uk. My hope is becoming a professional football player.