2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Suppose foreign friend wants to visit my hometown,Guangzhou,the first place I would take him to most is Shangxiajiu.Shangxiajiu is one of the biggest and most famous shopping centers in Guangzhou,he/she can somehow get closer to Chinese people during he/she bargaining with the salers.The second place I would take him/her to is Haixinsha,where is the most beautiful place in Guangzhou,I believe,and I am sorry for my word can't describe the how beautiful is it.We couldtake some photos about these fashionable buildings，the colourful lights at night.