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The importance of keeping a good mood Recently, the problem of people live under a lot of pressure has been brought to public attention. Now, there is a growing awareness the necessity to keeping a good mood. And there is no doubt that keep a good mood everyday is benefit for us. The reasons are as follows. First of all, when you keep in a good mood, you will work hard, and tend to learn more to get a promotion. What's more, if you are happy everyday, people who around you will be happy too. Besides, they willing to stay with you. So that you will have much more friends than before. Last but no least, it is a fact that every day there is a good mood can make you live longer. Which is everyone's dream. According to what has been discussed above, we can draw to conclusion that in the modern society, people should keep a good mood everyday, this word will be better again.
