简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
This morning I got up early. after breakfast, I helped mom do housework. Then I did my homework. The homework was very interesting, so I did it well. In the afternoon, I played table tennis with my friend Lingling, we enjoyed ourselves very much. In the evening I watched TV with my parents and then prepared myself for the next day's lesson. What a busy day!