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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9055
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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作者应多多注意句式变化;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;文章词汇表达不够丰富,在拼写方面也要继续努力。

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How to make a life be more meaningful is a very difficult to answer. Beacuse everybody have right to decide to how to spend their life. what's thing is meaningful? I think one hundred people will have one hundred answers.So if you think one thing is meaningful and spend your life on it,just to do it. I think spend time on enjoying fighting for your goal.The feel when get success is very beautiful.I want to learnig English ,so i spend many time on study.The rusult is that i can speak with others.I walk into a new word . But i think there will be someone who spend their time to enjoy life is meanful.Though this thought is oppositive to my thought,i got their thought.Everyone have their thought.So just to spend your life on what you think meaningful.

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