作者应多多注意句式变化;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;文章词汇表达不够丰富,在拼写方面也要继续努力。
How to make a life be more meaningful is a very difficult to answer. Beacuse everybody have right to decide to how to spend their life. what's thing is meaningful? I think one hundred people will have one hundred answers.So if you think one thing is meaningful and spend your life on it,just to do it. I think spend time on enjoying fighting for your goal.The feel when get success is very beautiful.I want to learnig English ,so i spend many time on study.The rusult is that i can speak with others.I walk into a new word . But i think there will be someone who spend their time to enjoy life is meanful.Though this thought is oppositive to my thought,i got their thought.Everyone have their thought.So just to spend your life on what you think meaningful.