小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；增加一些从句的使用。

Good friend I have many friends, but my best friend just one .She name is liling. she is a very friendly girl. She always help some people who need to help and she lalways smile to everyone .She kind and ballon .She has many intests ,for exmple ,she good at sing and dance .she love cooking and writing .she love dogs but she hate cat.and now,she has a baby ,so she stay the house with she's baby.