2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

drawing a conlusion quickly is not advisable when seeing or hearing something in my eyes. in our lifes,if one hear something bad for sombody and he or she will spread around quickly so the second one will do the same thing eventually the all know it.I think the thing is not that you seen and you should keep the neutral attitude rather than follow others because this is a faith or principle to deal with people. even if you saw it maybe it was not what you thought in this case you didn't know the cause and the concequece,so you didn't know what others thought.for example,a mother was teaching or even roaring her child strictly it's not what you thought that she was abusing the child. so we shouldn't discuss or evalute the thing when seeing or hearing something bad,beacause it's not advisable.