语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中词汇表达比较丰富,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
Drawing a conclusion quickly is not advisable when seeing or hearing something in my eyes. In our lifes,if one hears something bad for somebody and he or she will spread around quickly so the second one will do the same thing eventually the whole people know it. I think the thing is not what you seen and you should keep the neutral attitude rather than follow others because this is a faith or principle to deal with people. Even if you saw it maybe it was not what you thought in this case you didn't know the cause and the consequence,so you didn't know what others thought. For example,a mother was teaching her child strictly or even roaring it's not what you thought that she was abusing the child. So we shouldn't discuss or evaluate the thing when seeing or hearing something bad,beacause it's not advisable.
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