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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法基础较为扎实。

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Drawing a conclusion quickly is not advisable when seeing or hearing something in my eyes. In our lives, if one hears something bad for somebody and he or she will spread around quickly so the second one will do the same thing eventually the whole people know it. I think the thing is not that you seen and you should keep the neutral attitude rather than follow others because this is a faith or principle to deal with people. Even if you saw it maybe it was not what you thought in this case you didn't know the cause and the consequence, so you didn't know what others thought. For example, a mother was teaching her child strictly or even roaring it's not what you thought that she was abusing the child. So we shouldn't discuss or evaluate the thing when seeing or hearing something bad, because it's not advisable.

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