2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中能使用多样的词汇表达，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

In our society, the relationship between computer and man is a little complex. because there are hardly somebody can live without depending on computer and at the same time the development of computer need men's intelligence. With the development of the economy, recently everyone can have his own's computer, and working or studying on it. I have to say that computer have given us too much surprise and convenience if it losses someday we can't imagine what our life will be. We are improving the speed or performance of computer by kinds of methods to faciliate our lives. As far as I concerned, we should use computer correctly for example playing them in our spare time or work or study in the necessary time rather that use them the whole day, even don't relax, because doing this only makes us become tired or even unhealthy.