题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。
In our society, the relationship between computer and man is a little complex. Because there are hardly somebody who can live without depending on computer. At the same time the development of computer needs men's intelligence. With the development of the economy, recently everyone can have his own's computer, and working or studying on it. I have to say that computers have given us too much surprise and convenience if it losses someday we can't imagine what our life will be. We are improving the speed or performance of computer by kinds of methods to facilitate our lives. As far as I'm concerned, we should use computer correctly for example playing them in our spare time or work or study in the necessary time rather that use them the whole day, even don't relax, because doing this only makes us become tired or even unhealthy.