2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒。

In our society, the relationship between computer and man is a little complex. Because there are hardly people who can survive without depending on computer. At the same time the development of computer also relys on men's intelligence. With the development of the economy, recently everyone can have his own's computer, and working or studying on it. I have to say that computers have given us too much surprise and convenience if it losses someday we can't imagine what our life will be. We are improving the speed or performance of computer by kinds of methods to facilitate our lives. As far as I'm concerned, we should use computer correctly for example playing them in our spare time or work or study in the necessary time rather that use them the whole day, even don't relax, because doing this only makes us become tired or even unhealthy.