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My friend is a cute girl whose name is Stacy. she has short straigiht hair and yellow skin. She loves small.I would like to play with her everyday after school. Someday she gone to school late and teacher feel angry to her. She cried and i was really said. I wish our relationship could be as long as i could ever think.