文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
My friend is a cute girl whose name is Stacy. she has short straight hair and yellow skin. She loves small.I would like to play with her everyday after school. Someday she gone to school late and teacher feel angry to her. She cried and i was really said. I wish our relationship could be as long as i could ever think.