错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
My friend is a cute girl whose name is Stacy. She has short straight hair and yellow skin. She loves small. I would like to play with her everyday after school. Someday she gone to school late and teacher feeld angry to her. She cried and i was really said. I wish our relationship could be as long as i could ever think.