文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
My friend is a cute girl whose name is Stacy. She has short straight hair and yellow skin. She loves small. I would like to play with her after school everyday. Someday she gone to school late and teacher feels angry to her. She cried and I was really said. I wish our relationship could be as long as I could ever think.