2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；拼写方面做得很棒，平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者在句法层面做的很棒。

In our society, the relationship between computer and man is a little complex, because there are hardly people who can survive without depending on computer. At the same time the development of computer also relies on men's intelligence. With the development of the economy, recently everyone can have his own's computer, and working or studying on it. I have to say that computers have given us too much surprise and convenience if it losses someday we can't imagine what our life will be. We are improving the speed or performance of computer by kinds of methods to facilitate our lives. As far as I'm concerned, we should use computer correctly for example playing them in our spare time or work or study in the necessary time rather that using them the whole day, even don't relax, because doing this only makes us become tired or even unhealthy.