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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3577
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。

用户练习作文:

The pie chart above shows the result of a survey about what fast food teenagers in the US prefer. Obviously, hamburgers, pizza, French Fries are three most popular food of all. The percentage of those three food adding up is over the half. It is clear that teenagers' favorite fast food is hamburgers whose proportion is up to 33 percent. And then, 26 percent teenagers surveyed are fond of Pizza. The figure of French Fries is 22 percent. The left three foods are Fried Chicken, Tacos, Sushi, which take account for 9%, 7%, and 3% of fast food preferences respectively. And the total of later three foods is not even over the proportion of any one of former three foods.

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