2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Everyone pursue success.Success means a person gets a great achievement at an aspect then receives flowers and applause.However,the way to success is different. Most of people try their best to study ,no matter day and night to learn more knowledge and skills.Through the efforts,people can receive what they want and in rich in minds.