雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

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The pie chart above shows the result of a survey about what fast food teenagers in the US prefer. Obviously, hamburgers, pizza, French Fries are the three most popular foods of all. The percentage of those three food adding up is more than half of the total. It is clear that teenagers' favorite fast food is hamburgers whose proportion is up to 33 percent. And then, 26 percent teenagers surveyed are fond of Pizza., while the figure of French Fries is 22 percent. The three foods left are Fried Chicken, Tacos, Sushi, which take account for 9%, 7%, and 3% of fast food preferences respectively. And the total of later three foods is not even over the proportion of any one of former three foods.