增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;语言不流畅。
Dear David. I am Li Hua. I am studing in a middle school. I am living in Sanghai. This is a beautiful city. I like collecting stamp and doing sports. I am interested in English. I can sing some songs. My classmates want to make friends on the Internet. They hope to get help. I want to go to England. I am looking forward to hearing from you.b Best wishes. Yours Li Hua