希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;简单句比重太高了;层次不够清晰,文中很少使用衔接词。
Dear David. I am Li Hua. I am studying in a middle school. I am living in Sanghai. This is a beautiful city. I like collecting stamp and doing sports. I am interested in English. I can sing some songs. My classmates want to make friends on the Internet. They hope to get help. I want to go to England. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes