文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;简单句比重太高了;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Dear David. I am Li Hua. I am studying in a middle school. I am living in Sanghai. This is a pretty city. I like collecting stamp and doing sports. I am caught in English when I was 1o years old. I can sing some songs. My classmates want to make friends on the Internet. They hope to get help. I want to go to England. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes Yours, Li Hua