句法知识不错,但句子基本都是简单句;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Dear David. I am Li Hua. I am studying in a middle school. I am living in Sanghai, which is a very beautiful city. I like collecting stamps and doing some sports. For example, I play basketball, soccer and ping pong when I am free. I am caught in English when I was 1o years old. I can sing some songs. My classmates want to make friends on the Internet. They hope to get help. I want to go to England. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes Yours, Li Hua