作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Dear David. I am Li Hua. I am studying in a middle school. I am living in Sanghai, which is a very beautiful city. I like collecting stamps and doing some sports. For example, I play basketball, soccer and ping pong when I am free. I am caught in English when I was 1o years old. I sing some pop Englishsongs during my spare time. My classmates want to make friends on the Internet. They hope to get help. I want to go to England. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes Yours, Li Hua