小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,she name is liu fan. She likes listen music and watch TV ,but i don't like watch TV,because i think this is wates time. She looks thin and tall ,she has a long hair ,also she is very beautiful and smart ,we all like her.She is a kind girl ,when we have problem ,she can help us.