文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。
Dear David. I am Li Hua. I am studying in a middle school. I am living in Sanghai, which is a very beautiful city. On the one hand, I like collecting stamps and doing some sports. For example, I play basketball, soccer and ping pong when I am free. I am caught in English when I was 1o years old. On the other hand, I sing some pop English songs during my spare time. My classmates want to make friends on the Internet. They hope to get help. I want to go to England when I graduate from the university. Above all, I feel very happy to write to you and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes Yours, Li Hua