2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

In recent years,computers were used widely.People use computer do many things,such as shopping,listening music,watch movies and so on.In fact,with the development of technology,the network can give men more new sight,men can experience more new factions.We can use computer study many kinds of knowledge to strong own .The computer can give men happiness,strong own living quality. But the computer also give us many bad influences.People may often use computer shopping,there are many bad information in network,we can buy bad things,in the same time,if we often buy things in network,men can go out ,it is no time to do sport and it is not to have a good life.What is more,many teenagers use computer to play games and some are addicted to the network games,forgetting study,living.It is so bad. In a word,anything have two sides.We should use it correctly and wisely.We should realize that everything must see correctly.We believe that men and computer can get along well in the future.