小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

I have a good friend.Her name is Alise .She is twelve years old .She is a beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better. She is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. She often helps us .Our classmates like her very much.