单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
My new teacher is English teacher. He’s very strong and tall. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes. My English teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we have English class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou.