拼写做得很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
My new teacher name is Li Hua,she is an outgoing and beautiful .In my heart,I appreciate her help in my childhood.When I was a child,I was naughty in the class.Normally,a simple teacher meets this thing that he will seriously speak to you even beat up your hand.On the contrary,Li Hua hasn't took those methods treating me.She teaches me that you should concerned about someone's feeling who living with you,because you are not in oneself individual but in collectivity.So I learn that wherever you are you should think about others feeling.