单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white and black coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart.It is help me Looking for something。 I like my dog. Do you like it?