小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white and black coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one mouth. My dog is smart.my dog often help me to find things,but like sleep very much. I like my dog. Do you like it?