注意:
1.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
2.邮件首尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear Mike, glad to receive your letter, now I’ll show you my summer vacation plan. I should do sports first, Because I am a little fat. I will do sports every day, when I will be thin.Second, I will read many books which are good. I will help my parents to do some housework. It can help me to be better. Third,I will be a volunteer,when I will be free.I will help the poor.For example, I will help farmers to do something what I can do.I will help cleaner to clean the street. May you have a nice summer vacation!