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Dear Mike, glad to receive your letter, now I’ll show you my summer vacation plan. I should do sports first, Because I am a little fat. I will do sports every day, when I will be thin.Second， I will read many books which are good. I will help my parents to do some housework. It can imrove me. Third，I will be a volunteer,when I will be free.I will help the poor.For example, I will help farmers to do something what I can do.I will help cleaner to clean the street. May you have a nice summer vacation!
